Group: Pitch

Class feedback

Strengths:

• Appropriate overall treatment idea. Links to lyrics. Interpretation of themes/moods in track carefully considered
• External location  - Brighton - well researched and considered. Good inclusion of previous trip activities to inform concept development
• Party scene location considered and planned
• Clear visual idea with colour grading - some testing already carried out to inform concept development
• Suitable visual ideas from research clearly linked
• Roller-coaster shot considered, including risk and challenges using kit on the ride

Actions to be taken

• Organise clear cast for the party scene
• Resolve transitions / links between two characters - some ideas discussed, but it needs to be sustainable
• Careful story-boarding in order to resolve exactly what the male character will be doing in his line of action
• Test shots of colour on blog
• Is the love unrequited or is it a 'happy ending'? Clear planning of narrative trajectory
• Need to pitch proposed print ideas - no clear presentation in pitch of magazine advertisment and digipak test shots